Merry golds and Goldilocks
Orange and yellow fire flocks
Leaning, careening, merry golds
Goldilocks and rusty brooms
Fireballs and buttery blooms
Burning, churning, merry golds!
Bleating, deleting, blog post…
Wednesday, August 10, 2022 Merry Golds
I’ll probably delete this in the morning.
Lynniebeemuseoday 
I like both your versions. Here is the original just for the record:
Goldilocks and rusty brooms
Fireballs and lemony blooms
Waving, raving, merry golds!
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Thanks! I should have preserved both versions just in case, so you have done well in thinking of it.
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